sampling of coloquial diction in formal verse in which lacks the convoluted similies and metaphors that too often fill the lines of verse. who says poetry can't be just plain fun?
I definately enjoyed this Monty!And what an exquisite way to start out your poem:"Freedom is the night cloaked in perfect stillness..."Love the 'feel' of this and "Exhale. . .and feel your soul kissNight’s chill air..."You are indeed a craftsman Monty...let the flow continue...Roger ☺
"Let Darkness, soft, caress your life’s purple bruises,"This is so soft and lovely. I want to get lost inside of this! Beautiful, Monty!
I love this, so lyrical, great write.
Beautiful Monty "Let Darkness kiss your fears away" This has such meaning to me. Often my fears get sunburned into my spirit in daylight. I need the soothing balm of night to heal.