sampling of coloquial diction in formal verse in which lacks the convoluted similies and metaphors that too often fill the lines of verse. who says poetry can't be just plain fun?
WOW! Impressive composition Monty! "The sand created by God's hand..." Lovely!Roger ☺
This is like an incantation itself, very true to the subject, very well done.
MONTY!!! What a wonderful response to the prompt...Adore the lyrical flow, the form...this is YOU at YOUR finest...Encore! Encore! (And a big thank you for playing along)
This is wonderful! I love the Triolet format, and I think your words go well with the native American feel of the picture."The sand created by God's handHolds fast its hidden gift to sootheUntil the paint and prayers demand"Good stuff here, Monty!
Great response...it could be a prayer. I was going to list a favorite part, but I can't. I love it all!
Awesome. I just love this poetic passage that the art inspired you to write. Great piece. Thanks
his ways are mysterious (hidden) indeed, but sometimes he gives us a glimpse and how glorious that is!!!